Looks good so far.

Are the sharpeners made out of wood? It looks a bit grey and plastic at the
moment. It might look better if you rotated it so the grain doesn't line up with
the sides of the sharpeners. Also the lighting looks a little too even, try a
stronger contrast between the light and shadows because at the moment things
look a little flat.

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Tek
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"JWV" <jwv|at|planet.nl> wrote in message news:3ef1eec8@news.povray.org...
> Hi there,
>
> have been working on this image some weeks ago, but never posted it. I think
> it looks rather well, but it ain't perfect yet. So if anyone knows what can
> be improved, i would love to know.
>
>
>
> JWV
>
> PS: i know i used to much focal blur...
>
>
>

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